Wednesday, April 29, 2020

Room 12 Thursday 30 April

Alex has written this amazing 'Emotion' poem. I love all the descriptive language you have used, I can really feel what you are writing about.

confidence IS a wheel, what would it say? What would it do? What question would you ask it, because of what it is and how it speaks and acts? 


Emotion Poem
By Alex


Afraid is a shadow
Afraid whispers a low sound
Afraid would jump out of nowhere
Where are you from, Afraid?


Spooked is a weird looking monster
Spooked screeches a scary noise
Spooked is zombies attacking you
Why do you spook people?


Sad is a tear rolling down your face
Sad cries and feels down
Sad makes you feel annoyed
Where do your tears come from?


Excited is when you are about to go to a party
Excited sounds like chatter boxes
Excited would turn the world upside down

Why is your heart beating so fast?



Isla has written a beautiful poem about feelings. I love your simile...as positive as me!!!



1 comment:

  1. I really enjoyed reading your emotion poem Alex. Thank you for sharing it.

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