Alex was out in his garden and saw a fantail. He and his mum watched it for an hour and then he wrote this beautiful poem about it. I love all the amazing adjectives you have used to describe the bird and what it is doing Alex!!
Piwakawaka in my garden
Piwakawaka in my garden
The chubby piwakawaka swoops down
The chirpy fantail squeaks like a mouse
It likes to hang out in the neighbour’s olive tree
It swoops down to our sleepy dog DJ
The playful fantail swoops left and right, up and down
The curious piwakawaka is looking at us
Fantail adjectives
Brown golden yellow
White feathers under the fan
Cute
Chubby
Curious
Fun
Playful
Alex, what a treat to see a piwakawaka right near your home! The specific adjectives and the simile you used made me feel like I was right there. Thanks for sharing!
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